Here are the bullet points on the difference between good and great:
- A good pitch demonstrates your competencies; a great pitch showcases your passions.
- A good pitch demonstrates your product; a great pitch establishes your unique selling proposition.
- A good pitch talks about the problem; a great pitch creates a memorable narrative.
- A good pitch is complete; a great pitch is compelling.
- A good pitch is detail-oriented, a great pitch is concise.
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